She Can Light Up the World with It

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oneiria
oneiria
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Her smile
       was a gaping wound,

bleeding
       as she closed the door.

oneiria
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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Wow...

This can be viewed from different angles. Is her mouth really bleeding? Or is it blood red lipstick that "lights up the world"? I like the use of "gaping" and "closed" placed as they are. Succinct and searing.

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