- Erotic Poetry
- Short and Sweet!
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Oh my luscious lady,
Delicious scrumptious girl,
Don't you think that maybe,
We can give it a whirl?
I want your naked body,
Your tender tasty skin,
I want to lick and suck it,
Then do it all again!!
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoThis one is at least short enough that it can be read without a feeling of drowning in a sufeit of crudity.
Uncle P. - a little goes a looong way.
"Would you like some coffee in your sugar?"
You have far too much syrup on your pancakes,
and how many pancakes can one eat at one time?
When your themes are so confined that after a few stanzas all the eye can see are repetitions of the same vulgarities, you may want to think about shortening the piece or widening what you write about.
If you are ripping these out every day, then you have found your milieu, but instead of filling the bowl with turds, maybe you can stop and admire just one loaf at a time. ;)
