Sneltrein

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Tzara
Tzara
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Across the aisle,
features calm
as a pancake, sits

a cleft-chinned
porcelain doll.
She eats

a cheese sandwich,
placid as the cow
whose curdled milk

sits yellow in her bread.
The rain has stopped
and here is Delft.

Tzara
Tzara
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Reading this

makes me prone to puns, like "cutting the cheese". As a little "slice" of life, I like it, structure, word play, etc.

MNS

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
mentioned

this poem was mentioned in the thread, "New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the literary journey (~_~)

J.DoeJ.Doealmost 18 years ago
A fresh slice of poetry

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A spot of time

You've captured a moment in time. Your imagery is deft, esp

'a cleft-chinned

porcelain doll.'

which was my favourite here. It makes me want to go to Holland.

An excellent piece of pure poetry.

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