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the cool tendrils
of a changing time
soothe and restore,
the shortened days
clouding, protecting
from that burn
cradle just like your
arms
letting me settle in
and breathe with
more relief, knowing
that winter beckons
us to the warmth
of one another
I'll be your snow angel
you'll be my ice king
together we see
trees turn to glass
as they sleep
and our visible breath
comes out in
heart shaped clouds.

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 10 years ago

I enjoyed this. The short lines somehow fit with the season. I might have started a second stanza with the line "I'll be a snow angel" because I think it needed more separation from "Warmth/of one another/"

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Really like the snow angel/ice king line.

Maria2394Maria2394over 10 years ago
serenity on a page

I'm not a big fan of winter but you make it sound and feel warm and loving. You are always a pleasure to read.

~ maria

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Lovely

and a pleasure to read you here again. :-)

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