Solo, Want to GO?

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solo is acceptable,
this polarized world
without center ground,
places you in a drainage ditch

life's highway should be better,
moral codes, comfort codes,
religious edicts,
everyone has an agenda
all met to destroy,

no thanks

I'll sail a different course
above the incompetence....
till the world divides itself
throwing me in the crevasse,
where sanity had been

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sanity taken ~

I love this epic lil write of time,

and space. I can feel your urgency

to plant roots before it all unravels.

Just me, love it Sand.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
sound like

a master helmsman steering the winds of thought..vivid images that flowed ever so smooth..blue

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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The puncuation in poem is a bit distracting to me, but nevertheless, I enjoyed it. New imagery, fresh metaphor.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
nice write sand~

we each sprout wings from birth and soar different space and time yet one day may land perched next to another on a flight and share wisdom and.....poetry <grin>

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