spirit of the great winds

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bluerains
bluerains
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raven lives
on bordered
moonlight edges
watching his world
disappear
in houses of sand
and mortar

waiting for
restless ocean to
crack the dead
stones
and claim
the gathered dust

recently I attended a gathering and was inspired by
[A prophecy of Andrew bigsmoke ..a cree Native...]

bluerains
bluerains
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5 Comments
Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Nice.

It is brief, yet, it evokes a powerful scene of strength and determination.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
I love the title...

I like the visual of A raven waiting? Although some tribes consider the raven to be a wicked creature, ocean of dust and dead rocks? You got close to the peyote cactus didn't you <grin>

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in todays reviews

RybkaRybkaalmost 19 years ago
I Agree

This is my favorite of the day, but I wish it had a little stronger title.

AngelineAngelinealmost 19 years ago
Lovely

I very much enjoyed reading this. It is simple, yet expresses a kind of faith beautifully.

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