Steppin' on Toe's

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No matter where you go,
your libel to step on a toe.

Like the ye ole classic rhyme,
can't please everyone all the time.

Life's a dance, we learn as we go,
Yeah, its a song I know!

The world's gotten crowded and there's a lot more feet.
Just try hard to be kind and sweet.

Some are stubborn and done took root.
Just offer them a steel toe boot.

Tell them it could be worse,
Two left feet, they'll likely curse.

You can't stop a dog from barkin'.
Or even, the sore from harpin'

Stepping on toes is bound to happen,
Especially if their sittin' with their toe a tappin'

If you step on a toe look them square in the eyes,
Then kindly apologize.

Cause the good lord knows...
Your gonna step on toes.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Very funny

I liked this little poem for the most part, but since this is a short image it makes the cliches stand out. Maybe you used them as part of the fun for the write?

Joseki KoJoseki Koalmost 20 years ago
Snicker

That was pretty funny thanks:-]

echoes_sechoes_salmost 20 years ago
All too true

nice context, and Eve is right...she loves to be spanked :devil:

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
I like the content

You have a down-home kind of wisdom/humor going on in this poem.

But... I have to say this one thing. Spank me if you must, but I'm going to say it. The rhythm is off a bit in some spots and it's such an easy fix.

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You have:

"The world's gotten crowded and there's a lot more feet.

Just try hard to be kind and sweet."

You could try:

World's gotten crowded; there's a lot more feet,

so try your hardest to be kind and sweet.

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"If you step on a toe look them square in the eyes,

Then kindly apologize."

How about:

If you step on a toe, look them square in the eyes,

then by all means kindly apologize.

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Remember: just suggestions that may or may not work for you.

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