Succulent and Serene

Poem Info
186 words
4.56
8.2k
7
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here
Mo_B_Dick
Mo_B_Dick
10 Followers

His mind projects deviance upon 26 letters.
Granting the only ecstasy she cannot phrase
Words filling her mouth fill his soul.

All the way into your mouth, juices dripping.
Lifting her sweet chin offers a glance of innocence
Experience transformed into shyness and serenity.

For her service he serves sticky sweet bliss.
Blowing kisses until he cannot think.
The perfect depth to her throat.

He makes her take each inch without aggression,
Mutual reciprocity wrapped in kindness
Exploding into unselfish sin.

Words joining words into melodic
Confessing to him what his mind
Never imagined but actualized.

One reads, the other writes.
He runs and he lifts.
She whimpers and screams.

Succulent syllables licked from
Her lips become dreams of infinity.
Serving pleasure and wonderful pain.

Realizing the simplicity of her needs
Allowing his thickness to become every man.
He grants her freedom to sing.

Protects a voice and pushing her dreams.
He fights for her to deliver a killer blow.
Intensity matching a pyroclastic flow.

Watching a reality soon to be full, filled,
She creates the fire which his instincts.
Eternal bliss between her lips.

Mo_B_Dick
Mo_B_Dick
10 Followers
Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
9 Comments
mary_aranxiamary_aranxiaalmost 11 years ago
Your best poem yet

This is the best of the poems that I've read by you!

Five stars! Deserves more!

Butterflies512Butterflies512about 11 years ago
I can't stop thinking...

About this line: Succulent syllables licked from/Her lips become dreams of infinity. It's so beautiful, I wish...really wish...someone felt that way about my words...

Mo_B_DickMo_B_Dickover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks so much!

I plan on editing this one, as there are a few lines left hanging; the byproduct of improvised verse (or music). The flow must flow.

CinnerCinnerover 11 years ago
Extraordinarily sensual

I like this one even better than the last one!

Butterflies512Butterflies512over 11 years ago

This speaks to something inside me, a voiceless and the voiced, a combination in harmony to fully actualize both...

Show More