- Erotic Poetry
- Tease
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Click hereButterfly kisses...
up and down his neck.
His heart skipped a beat,
his lungs missed a breath.
Little kisses, little licks...
down..down..all over his chest...
His heart skipped two beats,
his lungs missed yet another breath.
The look in her eyes,
the blushing of her face,
the way her hair trickled over him,
the way she moved in place.
Constantly teasing...
Lower and lower her torture pursued.
Lower...
Teasing...
Lower...
Pleasing...
"gasps"
Teasing...teasing...teasing...
She wanted him,
but needed him fiending.
She needed him,
but wanted him to be the one needing.
Needing only her...
like there would be no others,
like no others had come before.
Teasing...teasing...teasing...
His breath...struggled,
His dirty words...muffled.
Teasing...teasing...teasing...
Grinding his teeth as his vision blurred...
he was becoming undone,
and it was all because of her.
She knew he was close.
She knew he couldn't bear much more.
And with that she stopped...
and strutted toward the door.
At that moment...he knew.
He wanted her. He needed her.
He fiended for her
and he could no longer resist.
With one stealthy move,
he had her down and by the wrists.
Pinned to the bed...
struggling...
madly she was kissed.
She wriggled beneath him
as she helplessly lost herself
underneath him....
His gaze bore into her and she knew...
How he needed her.
How he fiended for her.
She was his for the taking....
and he was all hers.
*blushes*
- COMMENTS
Girl_Undone28about 11 years agoAuthorErectus, thank you very much for reading and for your lovely comment. It is a relief to know that my writing is comprehensible to someone other than myself :)
erectus123about 11 years agoexciting teasing well written, believable
Yes, you are on point, some of the comments people leave are are worthless and cryptic, perhaps a sign that they are all ready in the crypt. A worthy comment that means to instruct points out flaws, gives suggestions, educates. In this case I have only praise after a first read. best regards!
Girl_Undone28about 11 years agoAuthorI appreciate your criticism. Thank you. Perhaps those individuals possessing a more advanced range of imagination would be more likely to appreciate the "accomplishment" without having it spelled out for them. ;)
