Ted Berrigan Spoke When My Eyes

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Angeline
Angeline
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Opened, traced memory patterns,
whorls of illusion in first light
above our bed, shaped in the breeze
that yawned, stretched the curtains
still half in shadow, a hesitant
gauze of a smile, still half-asleep.

There’s a pattern in that light
or the call of a whippoorwill,
its gently insistent song~

qui ko wee, qui ko wee

mixes the palette of dawn
liquid pearl, the early gold
of sun, the promise of blue
on my waking face. Here
is a lingering scent of skin
sweet with patchouli, an earthy
tang of tobacco, a you smell
like a familiar ghost present
in the morning motes or a certain
slant of sunlight I read about once
in a poem, grainy words swimming
in layers of its milky photograph.

Angeline
Angeline
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4 Comments
Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Great work

really enjoyed

the read, thanks.

~ J

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 19 years ago
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Well, it's great as always. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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What a perfect pearl this is. Wonderful language draws one into the peaceful intimacy.

Tess

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
Well let me

just quote this:

~mixes the palette of dawn

liquid pearl, the early gold

of sun, the promise of blue

on my waking face. Here

is a lingering scent of skin

sweet with patchouli, an earthy

tang of tobacco, a you smell~

A " you smell", god i love that.

Dreamy half asleep wondrous musings, curled with a lover.

A timeless moment captured

Excellent Ange

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