The Designer Ch. 12


That weekend marked a the beginning of a new direction of my life. My life had changed in that wild week that started with me meeting Kelly on the stairs. I made mistakes, but the mistakes only revealed a greater benefit. I wish I could say that was true of all my mistakes. I had some more to make, but that's a different chapter.

Author's Note: This ends the first part of The Designer series. I'm greatly appreciative of all the comments, and votes. It's encouraged me to continue the series. I have some great ideas for the next series to explore how Jeremiah learns the relationships aren't always so easy when one of the the members can't control minds.

Thanks to sportychica334 for all her help in editing and encouragement to continue writing. Thanks to beta readers Karenas and Emily124 for offering suggestions and critiques.

I hope the next part will kick off in a couple of weeks to a month. So be looking for it.

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