The End of Rain

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Angeline
Angeline
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A brighter sky unfurls
gray to white. Dawn drifts
in from the grace of night
to precede a waking day
blowing pines greener
on the other side of pane.

Busy toes curl straight up
to smiles. Sweet patchouli
scents the air now passing
doors closing and opening.

Angeline
Angeline
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
end of rain?

well then your doors should be open unless your toes are busy doing something else <grin>

ozymandiaskozymandiaskalmost 19 years ago
Wince!

Beautifully written as usual but Eve is kind about "other side of pane"

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Great images...

of a new day revitalized by the drops of rainfall.

CupidsGurlCupidsGurlalmost 19 years ago
Mmm Nummy

I can just smell that fresh rain scent.

Wonderful Imagery.

errr...

Can I go splash in the puddles now?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
*****

Your poem is mentioned in the New Poems Review of April 26th.

Tess

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