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tear the moon apart.
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GuiltyPleasureover 10 years agoThis....
...is my second try at leaving a comment but it's worth returning to say thus is near to perfection - the title, the simplicity, even the lay-out. 5 but it's not enough.
Angelineover 10 years agoWonderful
you have such skill with this. The words are perfect but so is the balance and the shape.
todski28over 10 years agoOk
With the simplest of lines you always seem to create breathtaking moments I love it.
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