The Meeting of the Minds

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His day had finally arrived
Passion was built up inside
And their erotic passion thrived

They were nervous as they tried to hide
How their curiosity did peak
How much would they enjoy the ride?

For many days they both did seek
Soon one was found they did admire
Their hearts did race and legs grew weak

Thoughts of how to please fueled the fire
Minds opened up to the moment sublime
As the passion built so did the desire

He enjoyed this most exotic time
As their clothes peeled off and hit the floor
The speechless moment as of watching a mime

Then all of a sudden they desired more
As pleasuring their man took first place
He was approached by bodies he did adore

Now the tracing of tongues put a smile on his face
They began to take full control
As up this thigh those tongues did trace

Three united as they began to feel whole
Wetter they got as his shaft did grow
Fire was burning deep in their soul

Tongues met with joy as they did show
Intense hunger as they began to please
Fantasy fulfilled his mind did blow

Licking his shaft as they loved to tease
Hands on their head such a wonderful touch
Like it had been rehearsed they worked him with ease

Sucking all over his cock and balls was too much
Groaning for them so they knew he was to explode
Never stopping hands all over his body and such

Pulsating between their lips he did explode
They dug their nails deep in his chest
He enjoyed every minute of this sweet abode

Two great women he was definitely blessed
This time was for certainly one of the best.

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erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
terza rima

is not so difficult in Italian, check out Shelley’s “Ode to the West Wind” to see it done masterfully in English. However, I wonder what the point is in emulating this style other than a brain teaser. I would put content first, and here the content is stymied by the framework. It reminds me of intercourse with a condom compared to flesh to flesh, i.e. a lot of the sensation is lost.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
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for trying, without looking too much at the words, this is probably the hardest rhyme scheme in English, advise - read translations of Dante to see how others used other means, in most cases you'll get a good feel for natural language flow. You may have noticed the 'pull' of the scheme.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great topic

but where's the excitement?