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Click hereRelaxed and nervous
the moment waits.
A split second of eternity.
A lifetime to wonder.
So real,
it must be a dream.
Every nerve
Synapse
Cell
Coiled like a mousetrap
Waiting
That moment when time seems to slow to a crawl and all the world's watching.
The illustration was self explanatory. That moment just before the first kiss. Words whispered softly touching the pulse of sensual love. Lovely rendering.
...is a good title, (hint, hint). Though I liked this, I found myself tinkering with order, repetition, and line breaks.
That a poem makes me do this, is good. It's an evocative graphic, L&F!
(As I did tinker a bit, I'll send that to you elsewhere).