The Night

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soft curls kissed her cheeks with the most delicate of touches
clad in her silk lacy robe , her beauty was unscathed
my whole body burning , fueled by her goddess like form
it seemed that i had consumed the fiery wine of the gods


and as i looked deep into those enchanting eyes
a dam broke in the deepest corner of my heart
screaming with passion the red stream flooded out
as i watched the robe drop down to the floor

was she the chosen one to be my guardian angel ?
to protect me from all the troubles and pain....
was she the angel , sent from the heavens to me ?
to replenish my ever greying world with vibrant colours

she beckoned me and which mortal could refuse ?
she led me deeper and deeper into the pitch black
but even with no light , her form seemed to glow
my mind was not my own , it belonged to her now

the night was heavy with the scent of our bodies
i failed however to comprehend how it actually was
for i had entered the mystical secret garden
and my mind and body were bound now ,forever her slave

but a slave she had no need for,it was love that she sought
and we had plenty to share ,and plenty to learn
dawn approached, our bodies still pressed together
smiling with the knowledge that this was to last forever

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erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nice, perhaps I might suggest

the line "i failed however to comprehend how it actually was"

does not need "however"

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