Tongue Tied

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bluerains
bluerains
15 Followers

lift me with your pale moon mouth
drop me down bare back
in soft meadow folds
tall grass blind
release reactive
circle bound
sensations of
charged meridians
roused by savage
command of elemental
hot spots
caught in emerging gasps
crying for deliverance
from probe
and swell
tangled with
tinderbox
buildup against my throat
infinity risen
wellspring ruptured

bluerains
bluerains
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5 Comments
oregon_galoregon_galabout 17 years ago
you capture....

a mood...and took me on a journey. sweet!

oregon_galoregon_galabout 17 years ago
you capture....

a mood...and took me on a journey. sweet!

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 17 years ago
tongue tied

... scratching my head (grin'n (~_*) very well said! from out of the erotic... blue

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Eros revealed in this well done poem; you just have to pay attention when you read then you'll see how hot it is.

wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 17 years ago
Poetry Forum

I mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone