tagNon-Erotic PoetryUnravelled and Broken

Unravelled and Broken


Flaws are not always fatal      
does the bird cry
as the eagle takes her
in midflight.
when the new moon rises      
bloodless in the dawn ,
the dark ones crawl out :
feel their pain         .

He looks at her broken form
      and knits it back with care        

till once again
the Sun makes them
whole again .

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