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twisting, turning, pulsing, yearning,
in and out, a moan, a shout,
around my hand, my head, my heart,
where you end and where i start
blending, churning, ending, burning
it all away, fall away
'til all that's left is us.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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A short, sweet tasty tidbit.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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The 'rule' is don't use gerunds

So here we have gerund overkill

But the way it's done ~ it works.

TeeTeeTeeTeeover 17 years ago
Just

flows off the tongue, enjoyed the read thanks for sharing.

TT

bluerainsbluerainsover 17 years ago
This Poem

mentioned on today's review