Want me to leave room for cream?

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Waiting for my order
She curled
her shining Sumatra dark hair
behind her ear
and smiled.

When she reached the counter
I thought she said
"Double short nonfat decaf cappuccino dry."
But it was noisy
Vampire Weekend
and the clatter of stoneware.

So it might have been
"Force me
to my fucking knees
on this Tuscan tile
and make me
do things
these fuckers
will still talk about
in thirty years."

Honest mistake.

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legerdemerlegerdemeralmost 7 years ago
Oh yes

I had those moments, from the other perspective. You hit the nail...

fridayamfridayamabout 13 years ago
What a wonderful idea

and so beautifully put. Has this been recommended? If not I certainly will. Ty

sb2009sb2009over 13 years ago
I love them all!

But this one...this one is fucking amazing!

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
I must say

I've never taken the time to read everything you put out. And I have one comment. You are frickin fantastic. Every single piece I though grand, and I look forward to more, so please, keep going. We don't get many poetry reads here, but I am gonna be readin your from now on, so please tell me when you post one cuz I don't check every day.

Rayven101Rayven101about 14 years ago
Love this!

I am really enjoying your work! this made me laugh :) I am sure for each of us there is one moment in our lives that we either wish to hear or say something similar.. Oh to be that brave.. ;)

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