- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Will my sinews loosen?
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Click hereA response to Lady Malachite's "Life, it must be Structured"
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232660
Will the structure of my life
loosen while I muse
on what you mean
the structure of life to be?
Spontaneity structured,
or perhaps, structured spontaneity,
or even, structured content evoking spontaneous worlds
Will my musing digest the sinews of my life
(the sinews that bind the structure of my life?)
as demands of continuity drift unheeded
past their point of purpose to become regrets
that murder spontaneity
perhaps
structure in words
bubbles from a chaotic sea
a frozen momentary truth here and there
while I slip inexorably
through the holes in the structure
thus unhindered by structure
chaos washes through the structure
neutral to my needs
- COMMENTS
WhiteWave48over 16 years ago...the way your musings suggest the fear of loosening those sinews of the mind to allow another's thoughts to enter - the fear of all cultivated restraint turning to mush under another's influence.
hippiedudeover 16 years agoa number of the phrases you use in this piece. I havent read the piece that you reference but your poem makes me feel like i should - oh so much to read and so little time lol well anyway i like what you've written here although the word structure might come up a little often for my tastes, you certainly give us something to think about
