wrestling passion

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the carpenter
recieved his carpet burns
wrestling with passion

it takes two to tango
and although her name
is not an emotion
in a headlock
she held his 'board-um'

one, two, three
wrestling with no referee
hammering to get nailed
thrusting, biting, and pulling hair

legs locked and bodies interlaced
both are winners
in passion's embrace

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 17 years ago
^

When you are 'hammering to get nailed,' there are no losers.

angelicminxangelicminxalmost 18 years ago
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Cute. I have an image of wrestling with a board and looking for a knot hole. It might have something to do with my trying to revitalize my passion for Lustful Leeves, ya reckon? *grin* Great poem, Art. ~Minx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
One of the best poems I've ever read

O my god! This is a work of art! Your cliches are so wonderful. Really, you should quit your day job and spend it writing poetry because you are that good!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Good

There is a good poem at the core of this. You've created a good setup for the reader but your language can be tightened further; the line 'it takes two to tango' is cliched, for example.