wrestling whiskey

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Dog day mornings and kitten prowling nights
Trying to slap your memeory, clean out of sight

I wrestled with wiskey, and the whiskey won
I even thought about, eating the worm

I thought the liquid would 'doush' out the flame
that burned inside me that screams out your name

I thought that the fires, flame would extinguish
so I drank till I couldn't, even speak english

but alchol on a fire will make it rise
even the sorrow that burns deep down inside

whishey and misery dont really mix
I guess your memory will always be fixed!

I wrestled the bottle for the last drop
I was at the bottom you were at the top

Swimming in sorrow and drunken tears
Thinking of the woman I loved for years

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
lamo <grin>

naw you aint a touched the stuff in years alby whats <hick up> up ... I meant UP?

LMAO

I can see you writing this one <lmao>

I loved it ...

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
You could do better

by working this over again several days after the hangover, but I had to say I love this line:

whishey and misery dont really mix

Jack Daniels is my brand, what's yours?

sacksackabout 19 years ago
this is actually believable because...

The several misspellings, stray comma etc. are plausible if someone drank a lot of whiskey! Stroke of genius or happy accident?

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