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Drifting through my mind; tangled wisps of hot desire,
Thread heated reckless thoughts of sharp deep aching.
You are colours;
Red for your passion, struck through with ebony black despair,
The streaming gold of pure emotion gleams with raw joy.
Roaming across my eyes; sleep fails in the morning gloom,
Hollow imprints of your absence mar the hope of the day.
You are flavours;
Vanilla sweet tender words, edged with lime’s sharp acid wit,
Dripping chocolate’s rich sensual blanket of indolent lust.
Pushing into my soul; silence clings to the dark of the night,
Purring memories furtively steal sleeps dreamless peace.
You are nature;
Lightening flashing sharp realisation, revived with an explosion of rain,
The surrounding confusion of fog tenderly stroking a meadow at dawn.
- COMMENTS
borgthemagicianabout 16 years agoExtremely impressive, such imagination.
All sorts of things make this so appealing. It's expressive, descriptive and imaginative. It made me think about memories, sleepless nights and recollections of times gone by, made me think of love.
xx
Luke's Angelabout 16 years agoThe first paragraph foundered but the second was much better and the third was amazing. If you can write consistently like the third paragraph then it's time for you to get published.
