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Click hereAs you lips close over mine I quiver in anticipation
In that split second before they touch
My heart leaves me
It goes to you entwining with yours
In that split second we are one
My body surrenders to you
It is under your power
In that split second you are everything
My eyes are lost in your
And I am complete
what a nice idea for a short poem,,, too bad the words did not match the thoughts.
at the second word, which should be your, not you. a simple thing, proofreading, does so much to increase the quality of a poem.