Your Ocean Eyes

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I'm shipwrecked in
Your ocean eyes,

My heart floats in
Your ocean eyes,

My soul swims in
Your ocean eyes,

How warm and deep
Your ocean eyes,

I'm drowning in
Your ocean eyes.

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Lauren HyndeLauren Hyndeabout 20 years ago
A whole ocean of opportunities, but...

Not a whole lot came out of it, I feel. The lines are empty, and instead of adding effect, the repetition is only... repetitive. You can do a lot better. :)

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