- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Your Storm (villanelle)
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Click hereI’m lost in a storm that’s you
While clouds of your kisses build
For there, my heart knows what’s true
The wind carries your scent through
As your words rained my soul filled
I’m lost in a storm that’s you
No dark or gray in my world brew
Though when you shine I am killed
For there, my heart knows what’s true
Lightening touches all that’s new
When thunder of elation trilled
I’m lost in a storm that’s you
Calm eddies curl past us two
And float on dreams as if willed
For there, my heart knows what’s true
As your voice in my ear grew
My night finds me freshly stilled
I’m lost in a storm that’s you
For there, my heart knows what’s true
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 19 years agoI admire your courage to do this (see other poem, as free verse)
"I’m lost in a storm that’s you" is not a bad line to start with and a repeat
"For there, my heart knows what’s true" is not a good line, worsed by repeating and use as a end
