Our New Neighbors Pt. 02

dead wives tell no lies

a stupid cunt is a stupid cunt, no matter what you wrap it in

kinky

The dad said he didn't want his daughter to see the two boys anymore. But he didn't say anything about not seeing their dad.

Please don't continue...

Just usual LW rubbish.

Typical cuck bullshit, can't even come up with something original.

The power and mystery of the big penis. The shock and awe of the big black cock, it can be a magical experience and addictive.

Lust 101, people want what they see on a regular basis.
Rebellion 101, people want what they are told they can't have.

No healthy strong willed woman will be denied the fuck of her life because "daddy, a boyfriend or insecure hubby" said so...lol.

Anonymous Commentators...

You always seem so willing to bash an author for the theme of the story, without offering any real positives or negatives about the writing itself. Style, prose, structure, themes. Worse, you do it in a cowardly, and spineless manner. If you are going to make a comment, step to the plate and identify yourself! Otherwise, why take your words for anything more than bot-generated spam?

Your feedback on how the character is a whore, or whatever, are pointless. THIS IS A STORY!

To the Author, please don't let these types of comments bother you. They are just typical of people who would impose their own sense of morality on the world. Keep writing!

satinlvr_mwf

Are.you not pushing your morality on otber commenters by saying what you said? Its pretty simple satin free site / free speech.Free to say what you want including you.BTW I know BBC is your thing I read some of your stories.Maybe just an agenda at hand.As.for this story a bit to cliche for my taste.

Breed

as a person of mixed Breeds. who me kemo soby. it dont work, got beat up for having a sexual relation with a black girlfriend. got beat up for being what they say a white cracker. mixed blood is no big deal as long as the racist on all sides keep there mouth sut. now that being said the story is cheap. and yes once u get black u dont want to go back. but reality is i dont like be beaten up by Euro american either. in th story the husband finds out. hes racist, she dont want to give up her meat that will make her pussie so loose that a normal guy will touch it.know what im saying. had some loose

SEXY AS FUCK!!!

Busted hard to this.

hope hubby

burns their fucking house down. with them in it..nothing better than seeing roated niggers over an open fire..i completely understand hubbys view with black and white you get gray and in this world yes it happens more and more now But what this story shows is a complete lack of any respect from a grop of niggers that does not respect oters values. I also hope he runs a branding iron up both his wifes and his daughters cunts to cauterize them for future fucking of any oter niggers ..i dont usually use that word but in the context of this story that family is niggers and really as far as it goes hubby should just sell the house move and drop his wife and daugher off while driving over a very tall bridge cliff whatever ..because neither of them respects him either..if it was me id take everything sell house take all money and drive into the sunset and as many others do leave both bitches to become the whores they seem to be next time try this in another category where it fits better has nothing to do with loving anything

Black Neighbours

She will go back and this time Macs Sons will help him sort her out as she knows she will love it ,....So keep it coming

Worst than part 1...

I didn't like it...why?This is a racist story, I don't care who write it...The two kind of racism are in here...Racism is all about no RESPECT!!! The white man didn't like or respect the black neighbors, and the black neighbors didn't like or respect the white people, mainly the women..This part is worst than part 1, and I now begin to understand who the writer is and what is goal is...Less than 1*...

To one of you anonymous people...

Hard to identify you as an individual since you won't even post an account name...

Freedom of speech is well-protected. So try doing it to help someone, rather than hurt. In this case, the author. So, to help the author, here is my input:

The wife in the story seems a little overeager to comply, making for no real conflict, save for the husband. There is no motivation given for why the wife would so easily be with a man her husband hates so much. Perhaps some backstory on a conflict between the couple? Some more detail would also go a long way in helping give the reader more feel for the story, the 'being there' moment.

The use of dialogue starts well, to build tension, but it sorta' fades away. Where's the art of seduction? As has been noted, yes, I'm fond of black men, but even I won't lay down and spread my legs just because some stud exposes himself. Try placing yourself in your character's shoes, what he or she hears, sees, feels, and perhaps that will give some depth to your protagonists?
Keep writing!

crap

this is crap. the husband is a racist POS and i dont feel bad for him at all. this whole story is race baiting. the wife and daughter are both written as stupid sluts. i assume the back father is in his 40's yet he is written like he was 19.i grew up around many black families, some of my best friends are black . this story is insulting. to the racist assholes that post comments, grow the fuck up you idiots. this isnt the 1950's anymore. morons.

Racist Crap + Cheating Sluts...

Sorry Buddy, but these two chapters aren't worth the time to read...I can't think of any ending which would create any interest in following these stories.

2nd comment

Actually, I just read your Bio and have to agree with what you have written there, just wish you had created a story without the racial overtones.....cheating should result in consequences....the tension in a LV story for me is how the spiouse who is cheated on reacts....what are the consequences, is it a BTB story, or is reconciliation possible, is there remorse or not....really no tension in your story and the characters are really not people we would either like or love to hate....they are just "there".

Wow, I did NOT see that coming

I mean, what are the odds that this story would develop so that the mother was fucking the husband. My god, that's so original, so out of left field. Amazing.

Okay, now that the sarcasm is done. Since this is a cliche and not a story, odds are the husband will be reduced to -- at the very least -- being cut off by Rebecca and at the worst waiting on them (e.g., food and drinks) while the neighbors fuck his wife and daughter --- and maybe at the very worst "servicing" them. This is the same story over and over and over and over ...

BTW, to satinlvr_mwf. At least the comment on the story and only the story, unlike you who can't seem to stand it when others dare to voice their own opinions. The net was largely built on being anonymous. If you don't like it, YOU'RE the one who's out of place. (And,sure satinlvr_mwf is your real name. Posting anonymous or a moniker, it's all the same.)

Are you saying that cheating with a black man is worse than cheating? Da'fuq is wrong with you?

Plus, if I walked in on my 20 yr old daughter in Theodore of a messy three way, I would kick all their asses. You want to fuck around? Do it in your own fucking house unless you actually ask my permission. It's my house and I get to say who enters and who doesn't! Ild plant my size 12's so far up her ass, she'll taste leather.

As for those cocksuckers, well boys, when you knock her stupid ass up, you'll be paying through the fucking nose for child support. By the time I'm done, you'll be selling your black asses on the street just for grocery money.

As for the rest of this racist bullshit disguised as a stroke story, go fuck yourself. I want racism, I'll read IR.

It's clear where this one is going

and it is playing to every racist stereotype there is. Race baiting at it's worst. Wont be following this anymore.

STD's?

If Mac plays around, wifey gets STD?

Death penalty for the niggas!

Once more confirmed by the author: niggas are living cocks being good for nothing than breeding white dumb whores. There is only one thing to do as it is done with any bugs...

Weak

No motive to cheat with mac character at all, you in fact presented the opposite case for the wife, not a cheater and not attracted to men with a tan. Might as well given him hypnotic dracula eyes as that would explain why she followed him up the stairs. And i think given the kids behaviour that there is no way she could waltz over there and not be noticed by a fuming suspicious husband.

lay odds

She has her husband a new asshole for talking too much to the pretty girl at a party.
(One that even if wanted to, would have no chance of dating let alone fucking)

Both women are whores and sluts

Husband just needs to divorce the unfaithful wife she is not worth shit and let her take care of daughter since she is just as stupid. Walk away they are not worth it.

Editor sorely needed

Chapter one is all about Hubby. We know almost nothing about daughter, except her hair, which then turns out to have NO relevance to the 'point' of the story (to date!) Sounds a lot like daughter is repeating Daddy's history with Mommy, except upping the ante with TWO swinging dicks - which Mommy MAY also have done back in the day when Daddy couldn't come over!

So, WHY are We The Readers supposed to care about Daddy's feelings ... and ... are we supposed to believe Daughter has not, for a good while, also been doing a bunch of the white guys around town?

There is NO seduction in Ch1 ... just BOOM, there she is, just full of cock. Ch2 turns out to have the least plausible (or erotic) seduction published in a while! I can see this opus leading to a lynching or massive public Hubby Humiliation ... or both! There might be an interesting story (or two) within the scenario somewhere, but I fear it (they) will not see ink unless Adela Beloruski gets and editor!

2* Hunh, Cherry excuses herself to Daddy by claiming 'horniness???'

MORE!!!!

GREAT story so far!!! Please keep it going!

More Please!!!

I would really like to read more about what happens to the family!

Please keep writing!

True, this should be in the interracial seciton.
True the daughter's talking to her dad about horniness was weird, and the story could use a bit more visual detail and tension...

But I LOVE the scenario. I love that the mother is matter-of-factly going to confront the black neighbor... and struggles with guilt after cheating, that she's not immediately some black cock slut... though I hope that happens to both her and the daughter. Whatever the ase, I would love to see where the story goes!

Please write part 3, i love the story so far.

Enjoyed it.

Ignore the ones that have no balls to give their name. I feel you rushed some of the events but the storyline is interesting. 4

Luv it, your name that is

So your parents named you crickette? That's your real name and not an anony mouse name? Idiot!

Please continue writing!!!! very hott story!!!

Hurry up

I can't wait for part three. this is a great story line.