Wish I could trade places with this guy,.. I would be in Heaven!... but wouldn't be the same without Ferry! Looking forward to #5,,, Love your writing Orie!
This continues to be one of the best-written stories on Lit in a long while. Exceptional character development, realistic dialog, and wonderfully descriptive prose. More chapters please, and if I can be so bold, SOON!!!
Reading is better than tv. Its late so I will finish this tommorow. You are covering some hot topics very well, hope he doesn't resent the girls later in life having his child, life takes time and we change hopefully for the better.
I'm definitely enjoying the series, but I have one, unfortunately major, issue with it currently. He worked with Ferry for a while, repeatedly hid things from her in ways that ended up hurting her, and now he hasn't seen her in probably the same amount of time as hes actually known her;
English
hoping ferry comes back into the story. maybe a little tequilla will help her understand the exhibision.
Kyle,..
Wish I could trade places with this guy,.. I would be in Heaven!... but wouldn't be the same without Ferry! Looking forward to #5,,, Love your writing Orie!
Really Good
Really enjoying this one, how many parts are there?
More Please!
This continues to be one of the best-written stories on Lit in a long while. Exceptional character development, realistic dialog, and wonderfully descriptive prose. More chapters please, and if I can be so bold, SOON!!!
Yes, more please!
I will echo the other comments. A very engaging & erotic read! I anxiously await the next chapter.
Distracting
I started reading this today when I should have been writing on my own multi-part story, and now I can't stop...
Time for bed.
Reading is better than tv. Its late so I will finish this tommorow. You are covering some hot topics very well, hope he doesn't resent the girls later in life having his child, life takes time and we change hopefully for the better.
Still enjoying the story
I really enjoy your style. The only downside is my testicles are starting to feel like raisins, but I can't stop reading.
Great Story
I'm definitely enjoying the series, but I have one, unfortunately major, issue with it currently. He worked with Ferry for a while, repeatedly hid things from her in ways that ended up hurting her, and now he hasn't seen her in probably the same amount of time as hes actually known her;
But he's in love with her. B.S.
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