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Extreme Measures

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/06/14

I really enjoy all of your stories and would love to see a continuation of this particular story. Thank you :)

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Okay, more.

That was a good start. And now there should be more, of course!

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by visioneer12/08/14

A well-written setup that merits continuation. To offer a constructive criticism, I suggest loosening the dialogue and making it less formal. Megan and Gwen voices come across stilted given the intimacy of their relationship.

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by mrusa12/10/14

GIM (Gwen Impossible Mission)

A continuation of this story is mandatory since Gwen's mission is not completed. And like it read "Nothing ever stopped her from completing a mission...". So will she complete the mission and arrest Megan or will she fail in her mission by doing something drastic? If Gwen succeeded in fisting Megan then I put my fist down and humbly beg for a next chapter.

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A perfect 10! Well in this case, 5 Stars! Incredible start to what I feel will be an amazing story.

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by Anonymous12/30/14

♥️ Uhmmmm wtf ♥️

This is The Start of an amazing story but uhmmmmm wtf is the other chapters the suspense is actually killing me

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