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I really enjoy all of your stories and would love to see a continuation of this particular story. Thank you :)
Okay, more.
That was a good start. And now there should be more, of course!
A well-written setup that merits continuation. To offer a constructive criticism, I suggest loosening the dialogue and making it less formal. Megan and Gwen voices come across stilted given the intimacy of their relationship.
GIM (Gwen Impossible Mission)
A continuation of this story is mandatory since Gwen's mission is not completed. And like it read "Nothing ever stopped her from completing a mission...". So will she complete the mission and arrest Megan or will she fail in her mission by doing something drastic? If Gwen succeeded in fisting Megan then I put my fist down and humbly beg for a next chapter.
A perfect 10! Well in this case, 5 Stars! Incredible start to what I feel will be an amazing story.
♥️ Uhmmmm wtf ♥️
This is The Start of an amazing story but uhmmmmm wtf is the other chapters the suspense is actually killing me
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