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What A Wonderful Stepdaughter Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/06/14

Language

Is English your second language?

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by rhimshot41512/06/14

You Need an Editor

The story is pretty good, but your grammar is extremely poor. I agree with the Anonymous commentator who suggested that English isn't your native language. An editor would help you immensely. And, having posted a story that should have been edited, I know whereof I write.

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by Anonymous12/07/14

nice

like i said befor mom/wife never finds out she is so clueless

carol

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by Anonymous12/09/14

Great story!!

Great story..Can't wait to see what path they go down next :-)

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