The story is pretty good, but your grammar is extremely poor. I agree with the Anonymous commentator who suggested that English isn't your native language. An editor would help you immensely. And, having posted a story that should have been edited, I know whereof I write.
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Anonymous12/06/14
nice
like i said befor mom/wife never finds out she is so clueless
carol
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Anonymous12/08/14
Great story!!
Great story..Can't wait to see what path they go down next :-)
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Is English your second language?
You Need an Editor
The story is pretty good, but your grammar is extremely poor. I agree with the Anonymous commentator who suggested that English isn't your native language. An editor would help you immensely. And, having posted a story that should have been edited, I know whereof I write.
nice
like i said befor mom/wife never finds out she is so clueless
carol
Great story!!
Great story..Can't wait to see what path they go down next :-)
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