Owned

Black man loses his jewels to a bigger white man.

Amazing what a machete can cut off in one wrack!

My 2 Cents

A really deep analysis - well thought out and expressed.................oops my bad that was a real story. This was shit. Stop submitting

doesn't know

The husband was in Black Ops, US Army Rangers. Shit storm reigns down on mansion. All occupants die as it burns completely to the ground and not even their dental records could identify them. Husband and child now live in a new state, happily ever after. The End

Stupid, Sick, Shit

I've made a number of comments on stories on this site. I don't think I've ever commented on an author. All I can say is if he thinks this is an entertaining story, he matches my comment - a stupid, sick, shit.

Utter Garbage

Not even worth a 1*. This place really needs a negative rating system and a blocked author option to keep crap like this away.

I can understand her leaving her husband

But how could she leave her child? She should have taken the child with her.

Perhaps she is having a mental break down.

Rarely criticize things in fetish because it is a reader beware category. This, however, begs for it. This was a joke, right? Hyperbole of the archetype? Or maybe just a pile of poo.

Unbelievable even as fantasy. Hubby is so perfect, yet she does all this. master beats her to pieces and hubby doesn't notice. Two tattoos hubby doesn't see. Did I miss the nanny mention earlier? Seemed that she just left the kid alone to go get fucked up until the after the fact mention. The only thing right about this mess is that she didn't take the kid. Your cardboard BBC would have sold her to the highest bidding pedo.

Keep the day job.

I hated this story.

And I won't score this since there we can't use zero.

Well, let me leave a somewhat positive note

I came here by a tag from the LW section I usually follow. This was the ultimate in D/s situations. A timeline of how long she had been married would have been nice. The tattoos were a wicked touch. Hubby would have found out soon, especially with the Queen of Spades tat. I'm like one other commenter, I could see walking away from husband, but how can a mother simply walk away from a 9-month old child? But it happens everyday in real life. Guess she figures that Antwan will give her plenty of mulatto babies to nurse at her breast.

Well, let me leave a somewhat positive note (addition)

I should have said that she would be nursing Antwan's kinky-haired mulatto bastard babies on her nipples.

stories of the mentally ill arent erotic

she states she is leaving the man she loves, who loves her, and her child. Very mentally ill but she will make an excellent BBC whore until she dies of drugs or disease

excellent story...more more hope to see a chap 2

What was your point?

Stupid people do stupid self destructive things? Pointless story, and a waste of everyone's time, especially yours.

leaving the baby

I was a bit stunned that she left her baby, but to be fair, should would not be a good role-model as a mother. Who knows, the black dude might use her as a breeding slave.