I loved this story, it was short sweet and beautifully erotic! Good job
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Anonymous12/07/14
Great short story!
Captivated my interest immediately and kept it. I look forward to seeing what other stories this author puts out in the future.
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Anonymous12/08/14
Crap!
No father calls his daughter "Baby Girl" and refers to himself as "Daddy" when talking to her. Childish, juvenile garbage.
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Anonymous12/08/14
Wanna bet??
To the other anonymous, my step-dad called me baby girl and always when touching and playing said daddy. Very sexy and very hot....loved this one very much
The sad anonymous troll who will waste time in his/her life reading something that clearly had a comment pre-planned, or the good girl who chose to take the harder option to write for other people's pleasure yet still retained the integrity and grace to leave the 'juvenile' comment up and embarrass (whatever it is) even further.
I know what my money is on xxxx
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Anonymous12/22/14
Yummy!
That was so damn yummy. He reminds me of my Daddy Dom, wanting to pamper and spoil me. I came twice.
To the rude anon, both my dad and my step-dad called themselves Daddy and called me baby girl, and an assortment of other cute names.
Loved it , you should make more chapters please !!!!!!!!
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Anonymous06/19/15
I
I liked that, you should write some more of this naughty daddy-daughter duo. It made me cum, I like an older man and calling him daddy.
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Anonymous06/27/16
Love
Made me think back to when I first saw my father nude. He was in the pool late one summer night and I decided to join him. I didn't realize he was naked until he got out to dry himself off. My father seemed to be moving in slow motion and made no attempt to cover himself. He stood over me and at the edge of the pool as I gazed up at his beautiful penis. He was so much larger than the three boys I had dated. I remember wondering how mother handled him. This sounds horrible but I've often thought back on that night and wish my response had been more forward. Do you think all girls have had the same nasty thoughts about serving their fathers?
Perfect
I loved this story, it was short sweet and beautifully erotic! Good job
Great short story!
Captivated my interest immediately and kept it. I look forward to seeing what other stories this author puts out in the future.
Crap!
No father calls his daughter "Baby Girl" and refers to himself as "Daddy" when talking to her. Childish, juvenile garbage.
Wanna bet??
To the other anonymous, my step-dad called me baby girl and always when touching and playing said daddy. Very sexy and very hot....loved this one very much
Very hot!
Great Start!
Nice story
This is a very nice story. I liked the slow pace.
...on being juvenile
The sad anonymous troll who will waste time in his/her life reading something that clearly had a comment pre-planned, or the good girl who chose to take the harder option to write for other people's pleasure yet still retained the integrity and grace to leave the 'juvenile' comment up and embarrass (whatever it is) even further.
I know what my money is on xxxx
Yummy!
That was so damn yummy. He reminds me of my Daddy Dom, wanting to pamper and spoil me. I came twice.
To the rude anon, both my dad and my step-dad called themselves Daddy and called me baby girl, and an assortment of other cute names.
Sweet
Thanks! It was great...
good read
hope you will take it farther along nest time.
Everything is awesome !!!!!!!!
Loved it , you should make more chapters please !!!!!!!!
I
I liked that, you should write some more of this naughty daddy-daughter duo. It made me cum, I like an older man and calling him daddy.
Love
Made me think back to when I first saw my father nude. He was in the pool late one summer night and I decided to join him. I didn't realize he was naked until he got out to dry himself off. My father seemed to be moving in slow motion and made no attempt to cover himself. He stood over me and at the edge of the pool as I gazed up at his beautiful penis. He was so much larger than the three boys I had dated. I remember wondering how mother handled him. This sounds horrible but I've often thought back on that night and wish my response had been more forward. Do you think all girls have had the same nasty thoughts about serving their fathers?
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