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by Anonymous12/07/14

Her Her Her

figure out some other way to start a paragraph PLEASE

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by Anonymous12/12/14

third person? but which character?

dont write in third person if you keep switching the characters' experiences. also start the paragraphs with ome tht is not she or her.

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