figure out some other way to start a paragraph PLEASE
dont write in third person if you keep switching the characters' experiences. also start the paragraphs with ome tht is not she or her.
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figure out some other way to start a paragraph PLEASE
third person? but which character?
dont write in third person if you keep switching the characters' experiences. also start the paragraphs with ome tht is not she or her.
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