Great detail its almost like I was watching in the train to... Good writing thank you
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Anonymous12/08/14
Everyone's wish
A hot sex show on the train. And this is the best. Hot, sexy, realistically described. Sounds like you would really like to be doing it all, and I know I'd love to watch (and more). Surprised it's only your second story on here but looking for more. Thanks
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Anonymous12/08/14
this was so vivid. good stuff, girl & a happy ending. thankyou.
slippery...
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Anonymous12/13/14
The best thing is that you can feel the caring that he has for her after they are finished. All too often we concentrate on the act and not on the love you have to have for someone in order to have that much passion. It makes the story feel real and gives a "happily ever after" ending as such. Almost made me tear up. :)
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Oh Boy!! girl you got a pair
Great detail its almost like I was watching in the train to... Good writing thank you
Everyone's wish
A hot sex show on the train. And this is the best. Hot, sexy, realistically described. Sounds like you would really like to be doing it all, and I know I'd love to watch (and more). Surprised it's only your second story on here but looking for more. Thanks
this was so vivid. good stuff, girl & a happy ending. thankyou.
slippery...
The best thing is that you can feel the caring that he has for her after they are finished. All too often we concentrate on the act and not on the love you have to have for someone in order to have that much passion. It makes the story feel real and gives a "happily ever after" ending as such. Almost made me tear up. :)
Very well written.
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