You definitely need further chapters describing Rose's maturation and acquisition of experience. You write well; don't stop here.
Hot start! I would love to read more. Will she teach her daughter how to domme her new hubby?
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You definitely need further chapters describing Rose's maturation and acquisition of experience. You write well; don't stop here.
Agreed!
Hot start! I would love to read more. Will she teach her daughter how to domme her new hubby?
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