Had my fingers in my pussy and love the story but please don't say "child" so much, it's a little bit of a turn off, baby girl, princess, sweetheart, just not child
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Anonymous12/19/14
Agreed.
I was super turned on until he said "child" every other sentence. Kind of a huge turn off. That's more of a grandpa or priest thing... Took me out of it in this and the next story.
While I find "child" to have an extremely dominating tone, my audience has spoken - I will be sure to leave it out of future stories. Thanks for reading!
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Anonymous01/09/15
I wish they would set up radio buttons or something for the author so that in addition to the story being stuck under a category it could be marked for type of content. I don't mind reading dom/sub stuff every once in a while but I've got to be in the mood for it. I didn't even see it coming, lol.
I'm not leaving a rating since I didn't finish the chapter.
...that being said, if I were her I would be saying "uh, no, sorry dad, I don't swing that way and I don't have any interest in trying. Besides dad, Im more interested in getting my pleasure when I want it and how I want it, not how someone else thinks I should based on what they want. Did I mention that you're kinda creeping me out? Having sex with you was shocking enough, I really don't need to know your kinky side, thats a little too much, sorry."
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HOT HOT HOT!
Fantastic stories! Love the daddy/daughter submission!
Fantastic
The second chapter turned out to be fantastic. I thought it was as good as the first. I would love it if Daddy's Girl went off of her birth control.
Perfect
Couldn't get enough! This better not be the end! Great job!
.... loved it
You are turning out to be a very clever girl aren't you xxxx
Very good
This is my kind of story and description, I liked it very much. Hope he never hurts her though.
I promise
Daddy will never hurt his girl. Well, not emotionally; she will enjoy a good spanking soon. ;)
hmm
Had my fingers in my pussy and love the story but please don't say "child" so much, it's a little bit of a turn off, baby girl, princess, sweetheart, just not child
Agreed.
I was super turned on until he said "child" every other sentence. Kind of a huge turn off. That's more of a grandpa or priest thing... Took me out of it in this and the next story.
Thank you for your feedback
While I find "child" to have an extremely dominating tone, my audience has spoken - I will be sure to leave it out of future stories. Thanks for reading!
I wish they would set up radio buttons or something for the author so that in addition to the story being stuck under a category it could be marked for type of content. I don't mind reading dom/sub stuff every once in a while but I've got to be in the mood for it. I didn't even see it coming, lol.
I'm not leaving a rating since I didn't finish the chapter.
...that being said, if I were her I would be saying "uh, no, sorry dad, I don't swing that way and I don't have any interest in trying. Besides dad, Im more interested in getting my pleasure when I want it and how I want it, not how someone else thinks I should based on what they want. Did I mention that you're kinda creeping me out? Having sex with you was shocking enough, I really don't need to know your kinky side, thats a little too much, sorry."
Well, chapter one was pretty good but the direction this one went totally turned me off.
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