The Knot Tattoo

Haha, I like the last line.

What is it with the stories where the girls sit there and feel themselves up and have to stare at themselves in the mirror?

needs work

I was bored by the second paragraph. It's not believable, and you kept changing verb tenses.

Never explained what kind of world is this, you just jumped in like "oh yeah there's an Ogre." And julianna is an annoying character.

Cute!

It's an Orc, not an ogre and that's what redeems the story. I gave it a three; not great, almost good but unexpectedly and cute.