I love the idea of m-preg, having the tables turned as the man is forced to see what it's like to be on the other side of things. Bring on the next chapter!
Though I'm a big fan of stories set in a fantasy setting, I'm not fond of magic as a direct mind control/coercion, as it almost always violates the consensual part of "safe, sane, and consensual." I think the story has promise, but I'd love to see Sir Sam actually be convinced of the merits of being with the wizard, instead of just instantlyOMG MAGIC COCK.
Keeping with my usual ridiculous habit of never finishing anything, I will not be writing another chapter for this story. But I do want to just say that this story is supposed to be cheesy, it's not supposed to make all that much sense, and it's just supposed to entertain my mind.
I would have liked there to be more of a mental fight, as Sam tries to resist these sudden cravings, tries not to submit. He should still fail, of course, but it'd be more interesting, I think, if Victor's spell worked a little more slowly to subsume his will. Other than that, not a bad tale at all. :)
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don't bother with another chapter
Bring on more!
I love the idea of m-preg, having the tables turned as the man is forced to see what it's like to be on the other side of things. Bring on the next chapter!
I really liked your story
Though I'm a big fan of stories set in a fantasy setting, I'm not fond of magic as a direct mind control/coercion, as it almost always violates the consensual part of "safe, sane, and consensual." I think the story has promise, but I'd love to see Sir Sam actually be convinced of the merits of being with the wizard, instead of just instantlyOMG MAGIC COCK.
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Keeping with my usual ridiculous habit of never finishing anything, I will not be writing another chapter for this story. But I do want to just say that this story is supposed to be cheesy, it's not supposed to make all that much sense, and it's just supposed to entertain my mind.
I would have liked there to be more of a mental fight, as Sam tries to resist these sudden cravings, tries not to submit. He should still fail, of course, but it'd be more interesting, I think, if Victor's spell worked a little more slowly to subsume his will. Other than that, not a bad tale at all. :)
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