Short and sweet. The way you crafted this story was brilliant. I look forward to learning more about these two people if you care to elaborate on their bliss.
still don't know enough to like, or care about these people.
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Short and sweet. The way you crafted this story was brilliant. I look forward to learning more about these two people if you care to elaborate on their bliss.
I read it again,
still don't know enough to like, or care about these people.
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