Halfway through the first real paragraph I gave up reading this. Poor spelling, grammar and punctuation made it unreadable.
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Anonymous12/13/14
yup
I have to agree.
It's a shame because this could have been a good story. Good idea but ruined by poor presentation.
by
Anonymous12/15/14
Just a hint
What you are writing about is very hot, but you need to fix all the mistakes. Reading fiction is like a dream and when you have to stop and figure out grammer it is like waking up. Not a good thing. I'd like to think you were typing with one hand. Go back and check it when you're done.
English
Couldn't read it
Halfway through the first real paragraph I gave up reading this. Poor spelling, grammar and punctuation made it unreadable.
yup
I have to agree.
It's a shame because this could have been a good story. Good idea but ruined by poor presentation.
Just a hint
What you are writing about is very hot, but you need to fix all the mistakes. Reading fiction is like a dream and when you have to stop and figure out grammer it is like waking up. Not a good thing. I'd like to think you were typing with one hand. Go back and check it when you're done.
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