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Class Demonstration Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/11/14

great start

thanks for a hot opening chapter, I thought it was really well written, I look forward to next one :)

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by camperguy12312/11/14

Licked the story start.

Hope we will not have too wait long for you too continue.

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by wdbtchr12/11/14

Good start, looking forward to more.

Liked the style of writing, erotic without getting to stuck on physical details.

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by SWT312/11/14

You have me hooked

It is fun writing. And there are so many ways this story might go,,,Thanks
Wes

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by SkinTickler12/12/14

I love the antici...

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pation!

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by suelove5812/12/14

Nice scene setting

Definitely looking forward to the development of the story.

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by Anonymous12/13/14

Great Start

Very hot story. I'd love to see Jessica and Dan coaxed into performing, solo and with each other, for the class. Thanks for the work.

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by NakedDan12/14/14

Thank you

Thank you all for the feedback and to the 20 people (so far) who clicked this as a favorite. I submitted Chapter 2 late last night, so it should be live Monday or Tuesday (I hope). Now, off to work on Chapter 3...

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by Anonymous12/14/14

Thanks Dan...

Thanks for the update Dan, it's always helpful when an author takes the time to update his fans :) I'm not surprised that your story has been so well received, as it is so erotic and full of possibilities! I love to reread a story a good few times, picking up little clues and details that I may have missed originally. I've got a feeling that Jessica is going to have the time of her life :) Thanks again.

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by Anonymous12/15/14

just a coincidence lol

20 or so folks have favorited this story...and there are going to be 20 or so students in the class...I guess everyone wants to be there...lol

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by Anonymous12/15/14

looking forward to the rest of the story

I have done nude modeling and I have fantasized about this kind of a job. I hope you will do the sequel to this soon. I don't want to miss it.

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by Anonymous01/15/15

Erotic and well written

Very interesting, very erotic. Extremely well written. Tania

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