The Lesbian Boss

Grammar issues

Not too bad;I liked the concept of the story...but..there's no such thing as 'worser' or 'worsest'. It's 'worse' and 'worst'.

Keep writing!

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did they stay a couple that came outest or was this a one time thinger

Story got me hot, and I am a guy

I loved the innocence of Melanie; she reminds me a bit of the character in 50 Shades.
I hope you will continue this tail..

Thanks
Wes

Thank you guys for the comments

I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) I actually like the ending myself, maybe I will do a part 2.

Very Cute

This story was pretty good. I enjoyed it a lot! It escalated very very quickly and it made me giggle (in a good way). Keep up the good work.

AWESOME.

Great story to fantasize about.
I love women who holds a strong authority job.

Your story

I enjoyed the story. It was fairly well written. One suggestion is you might want to be careful with your grammar. There is no such word as worser. The word is worse.

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I'd say this one is too fast and too unbelievable. Big and scary boss should be scared shitless for chasing after straight secretary - one tiny mistake and rumors could bite her in the ass.
And the main heroine falls in love far too easy. Being gay is not a simple switch you could flip on a whim.
No matter how powerfull the boss-ladies are, love make them soft and fluffy and cautious. This work of fiction denies basic laws of nature.

Not bad start destroyed with shocking English

Please buy a dictionary and thesaurus your story is ruined by shocking English. For example ... "worsest" ? There is no such word. This is only one example of bad word choice, shocking spelling and abysmal grammar. I suggest you find a reliable editor

make a part two please

i loved this
very good 👌

my experience

it takes initial mutual attraction to get into bed so quickly.

oh god

It went by too fast. Not enough detail

I really enjoyed this!

Dominant, predatory lesbian bosses are HOT, and I loved the way she took control of her pretty employee, although a little more seducing would have made it hotter still!

mmmffff yes thank you!! :) more labia-on-labia, i say. more!! haha

Conjugate that punny...

...worse, worser, worsesest. Hey, it workest for me! Get a sense of humor folks, It like you analmousies are terrified by humor.