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that's 5 minutes of my life I'll never get back

What a dumb story!!!! Seriously? Unless you're going for true fantasy, a fictional story must have a grain of reason and possibility. this has none of that. No management group in its right mind in any company would condone keep a stable of sex slaves for it's employees. Do you realize how devastating that would be if it got out? All it would take is one disgruntled employee, such as a lower level manager who loses his turn to a senior person and decides to blow the whistle.Yet you write about it as if i it could happen. No it couldn't!!!! It may be a reasonable proposition if you had written that he had offered her some sort of deal involving paying off her debt in exchange for "services" and giving her a bogus position in the company and kept it as a secret perk for senior management only. But no, you were lazy and went right for the "sex slave" angle.

Nice twist