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Glory Hole in Dallas

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous12/14/14

More please

very good - looking forward to a continuation

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by 4yourpleasureiam12/15/14

Liked that you waited for the fingers to ask for your cock, That is very important. Then you also gave a good description of the cum stained wall and oh yes the feeling or should I say the need to drive your body tight to the wall as you cum.

Nicely done Dear writer
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by J1biboi12/15/14

Great story. A different perspective for me. Most of the stories that I have read about glory holes, is about sucking cock, not getting your cock sucked.

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by Anonymous12/15/14

I really enjoyed your story.

I really liked the twist at the end.

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by GoldenCojones12/20/14

Loved the end

I love a trick ending. This is a good short story. Keep writing.

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by Celia6212/21/14

Great first/second effort

You are finding your level Adeyln, the descriptions are great and the tension and expectation build nicely. Love the twist at the end even though I had an inkling it was coming to make her trans was special. You are gonna do just fine girl!

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