Speed Demon Squishypants at the Club

good start

this was a good start. you should continue with these characters, i am really interested to see how his humiliation continues. i like that the crush of his dreams is doing it, maybe she will cuck him too.

Fun story

Quite a few women have learned how to benefit from being with little guy. Women have upper hand in relationship and can control man easily.

mechanics of your writing is fine

but the content of the story is so completely absurd.

Part 2

Great

Good story. Would be interesting to see a continuation maybe she lets him fuck her and he cums as soon as his dick touches her pussy.