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Through the Woods Ch. 02

byAliceChaney©
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by ham_sandwich12/13/14

Classy work!

You write well, Alice. Fives!

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by Anonymous12/13/14

Looks like master ordered in, not ordered out. ;)

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by submitting112/14/14

Another 5 stars!

I'm hooked! :)

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by elisebee12/15/14

Ham has it right

You write exceptionally well and are engaging to boot! It is so refreshing to read an author who can use taught and taut correctly. So many really good writers share their gifts with us but spoil the delivery with mistakes such as breath and breathe.

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