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The Space Rush Era Ch. 01

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by Anonymous12/16/14

Good beginning

Generally interesting story. Will follow for now. You need an editor. Quite instead of quiet. For about one sentence you switch to first person and present tense. Don't give up. A promising tale.

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by Anonymous01/19/15

good start

Good start. Chapters are a bit short though. Also if you could turn on the ability to rate the story you might be able to gauge better how your readers feel. Not all will leave a comment. Lastly, related to some comments from the 00 chapter, if you would consider updating your profile with a bit more information we might be better able to relate to you. Knowing Where you're from can sometimes help us to understand minor mistakes. Thank you for sharing your story with us. I'm interested in seeing where you go from here.

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